in soft, morning light
I awake to watch your sleep,
beauty in your breath
in soft, morning light
your smooth, bare legs lie out from
under crumpled sheets
in soft, morning light
you awake to my caress,
wetness flows, we kiss
Author notes
a tribute to waking from a wonderful dream to a beautiful reality that will last a lifetime...but starts with a first time...
A contest entry
- Sensual Haiku by Dalaney.
1050 points, ended August 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #127 One for the Men (adult only please) by daviscth.
300 points, ended September 4, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a wonderful piece and I love the imagery it inspires. Thank you very much for posting in my contest.
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Very beautiful and sensual... Best of luck
Ken
(You might want to check the meter - haiku's typically have a 5-7-5 syllabic count)
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