your breath
falls on my skin
light as first snow
I dance
a blue ballerina
in her snow globe
a wondrous world
that you stir
each time you inhale
each time you exhale
Author notes
pic prompt #4 http://frozenstarro.deviantart.com/art/First-Snow-74772177
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie... Are You Interested?? by Sweet Impatience.
1025 points, ended August 26, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Unlike so many others (myself included) you know when to stop. You say just what needs to be said. So, your poetry is fresh and honest and I never feel like I'm being manipulated by your work. That is really nice. Well done.
Garrison
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the image that you've created with your poem/words is extremely vivid. I really enjoyed reading this..
You did an excellent job with both the prompt & your poem
good luck in the contest
kat
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wow this creates such a beautiful and powerful image. good luck
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I really like this poem. Its such a good take on the prompt! Written with so much care... I really really enjoyed reading it..!
Good luck in the contest
-RoseDaughter-
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