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on His Mind

She was on his mind.

  Every moment of the day.

Just like the rain that falls.

  She was always dropping in.

 

They had only met,

  Just a short time ago.

His heart leaped.

  His mind wouldn't let go.

 

Day or night she drops in.

  Her beauty charms him so.

While at work she is so near.

  To speak to this stranger gives him fear.

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  • z etoile
    August 28, 2008
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    How nice tongue tied. Well done and congrads on the HM!


  • Nicada silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    This is an original take on the picture prompt. I like what was inspired in you by this. Great job, and thanks for enetering my contest. Blessings, Patty


  • crimsondew
    August 26, 2008
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    captured the prompt well dear...
    Good luck in the contest!