softly arching lips
curve in a welcoming smile
love’s invitation
softly curving form
peaks under passion’s demand
shivers of pleasure
sinuous blossom
blooms in joyful acceptance
rapturous climax
Author notes
Prompt: Sensual Haiku
Picture Credit: http://tearanny.deviantart.com/art/Curves-30205928
3 haiku per entry
A contest entry
- Sensual Haiku by Dalaney.
1050 points, ended August 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
Comments
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this is beautiful. you did a wonderful job. I've never done a Haiku before.. very sensual and I really enjoyed reading it.
excellent job my lover
kat
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This is a beautiful haiku, filled with sensuality. You did a wonderful job on this. Thank you for your nice comment on mine. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain
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Nice to have competition. This very nice.
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Traditional Form done very well. 'sinous' is an amazing word. You brought a very vivid sense of passion out with your carefully selected words. I liked this!
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Well penned with exceptional word choices. Best of luck to you sir.
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Woohoo! Sensual haiku. Clever. Love 'rapturous climax'.
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