Enchanted sighs
breathe colored
kisses upon angelic lips.
Butterflies land
upon a soft lullaby
as the rhythm
of our hearts unite.
Underneath starry skies
blossom's a warmth
born from the
sensual touch
of golden love...
Author notes
10 Poets
30-50 words
1hr max
35 words
http://frozenstarro.deviantart.com/art/The-magic-path-45554068
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie... Are You Interested?? by Sweet Impatience.
1025 points, ended August 26, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Enchanted sighs
breathe colored
kisses upon angelic lips.
Butterflies land
upon a soft lullaby
as the rhythm
of our hearts unite.
and all that got you was a bronze. Someone just doesn't grasp the idea of sensual well. Butterflies land upon a soft lullaby, was so beautifully put. Such origonal description. It reminded me of fantasia.
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ooh really nice my flower angeel
congrats on your bronze you deseve it
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Short, sweet, and beautiful.
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very beautiful good luck
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beautiful
this is so soft and sensual baby sister. wonderful write. best of luck in this contest sweetie
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ooohhhh this is a beautiful poem. so soft,and calming. I love the 2nd & 3rd stanzas. excellent job with the prompt.. and Fantastic job with your poem
good luck
kat
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Indeed a lovely take on such a pretty picture... You pen happiness and peace in ways I can't even fathom. Well done, and good luck!
Laura x
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very nice!
great imagery here. lots of luck in the contest my friend!
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Very pretty sissy
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Lol.. thank you sissy I'm glad you liked it!!
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