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Nuptials

Missing image
Mind's her past's looking glass,
betrothed in her soul
unto sorrow's lover,
heart buried in regret's graveyard
clinging to hate's headstone.

Desperate to find path to trust's garden
dressed in hope's wedding gown,
that she can say I do
on tomorrow's wedding day
to the one who gave her resurrection.

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50 words
Option 6
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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    WOW!!! this is a very deep, thought provoking poem. the imagery is fantastic and the first stanza blew me away.. *jaw drops*..

    excellent take on the prompt & the poem is fantastic

    good luck

    kat