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The Path to your Soul

The path which
lights the way
will reveal to
you the magic within
If you follow where
your heart shall
take you, you will
find the peace
inside your soul

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Option 2
40 Words
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this is a PIF Contest. Winner needs to PIF 300 points.


10 Poets


30-50 words



1hr max


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Comments


  • Swan song gold member
    September 2, 2008
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    This is truly splendid!


  • jcat gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    This was very beautifully said......Almost like something I would read in a fortune cookie....Very sage!! Brilliantly written and best wishes


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    I absolutely love this poem.. I can relate to this in many different ways. especially the last 5 lines. this was something that I needed to read right now & was very important for me.
    you did an outstanding job with both the prompt and the poem..

    good luck

    kat