That very first time,
so long for the both of us.
In candlelight love.
We are well suited:
She's panting, me with no shirt.
Clothes do make the man!
A shy, demure smile
as her clothes land on the floor.
Ecstasy awaits!
A contest entry
- Sensual Haiku by Dalaney.
1050 points, ended August 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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These are nice.
soft and delicate.
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Nice done... very sensual.
Ken
PS Did you realize there were supposed to be a trio of haiku's?
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