Cold driving rains
boil the warm water's surface
of my favorite lake,
where under the canopy
of an old oak tree,
I sit alone,
gazing in wonder,
as I see you
in the mist
Author notes
LIONHEART
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Good job on this. This is a beautiful piece. Good luck ang keepwriting!! -
You had really good imagnary in this one. I enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work. Thank you for entering and best of luck!!~
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lovley imagery,
thanks for entering
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Lovely!
This is a very nice piece. Short, simple and to the point. The imagery in this write is also very nice. A very enjoyable piece! Nice job and good luck! -
you left me wanting more and more! i felt like there was such a story behind this piece and i so wanted more. but what you have is really well written and really sets up the scene well.
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this is a great poem. good work here.
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Thanks for sharing:
Wonderful. I'm glad this makes you smile, and that you thought to share this with us. I love it. And welcome to the finalist.
Love,
Evemauy
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Just like the last one you entered, this creates such a beautiful image. It's tranquil and soothing, and I especially enjoyed reading it.
Thank you so much for your entries, both are lovely.
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Such wonderful entries have graced my contest!
I loved the atmosphere you have created for your reader, A well written and constructed piece.
This is an enchanting poem that will lay with the heart forever.
Thank you for entering, x
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Thanks
I am glad you like this write
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this reminds me of a foggy day in London lol. thank you for this entry
good luck
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wow this is nice... I like the imagery here. For a short write you really say a lot. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest. Nicely done.
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nice work! love the imagery in its barest, purest form. well done. best of luck in the contest. Keep on writing, ~TC
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nicely penned . . liked "boil the warm water's surface" and "as I see you in the mist" . . good luck in the contests . .
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Thank you, I am glad you liked this poem
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This is great. So short and yet filled with imagery. Not always easy to do. thank you for entering
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Beautifully written
Great imagery..well done
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Choice moments such as this time alone with nature and memories are far and few between for me. They are treasures. This piece goes to the depths of an understanding with lifes paths and collected memories.We all require such special times to maintain balance.Beautifully expressed in poetic voice.Honest emotions are the best.
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AWESOME
THIS REMINDS ME OF SOMETHING I WOULD DO. THX FOR SHARING GLAD TO SEE YOU BACK RICHARD.
LINDA
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