My coarse fingertips glide
and explore the luscious curves
of your smooth, soft body.
My dry lips yearn for you,
crying out for the warmth of yours,
needing the loving kisses only you can give.
My desperate eyes stare
into your own beautiful gaze,
imagining what you might be thinking.
My beating heart cries out
for you to love me as I love you,
desiring your own to keep it company.
My arms feel so heavy
reaching out toward you,
waiting for your own to surround me.
My ears ache so much
for the sound of your voice,
needing you to speak those beautiful words.
My soul is empty without you
and those words which I need to hear,
the three little words: "I love you"
Author notes
This is my dedication to my love.
A contest entry
- Art [Series One] by adsaige.
600 points, ended September 5, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Oh... sooooo Sensual Please! by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended September 21, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Awe... This is so sweet.
Excellent job and thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Oh wow. i can feel the stabbing longing this piece is surly based on. wonderful write.
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i can only say i will send my next lover this poem with your name on it , but from me .... if that is okay
you rock, my man .... truly
beautiful, beautiful, beautiful
whoah!!!
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JUDGED
I absolutely cannot express the beauty that I see in this piece of work. You dedication
is filled with lavishing attention for your love, a beautiful poem that is inspired by
real life. I cannot express my gratitude and thanks for the absolutely beautiful
poem you entered that has given me hope yet in love.
Adsaige -
RULES REMINDER, PLEASE EDIT
TWENTY-THIRTY LINE REQUIREMENT; before I can comment and judge, please edit to fit the contest requirements? I'd hate to DQ this beautiful piece. It is incomplete. -
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I have lengthened it... I hope it is to your liking.
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