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beauty is only skin deep

so here we are again face to face
an echo from my past,a memory
songs play and feelings come back
a story that has no end
a single tear,a beautiful disaster
so many nights alone i dreamed
then the day comes and it rains
questions that answers contridict
gives me peace inside
words say the flame never died
i stood still and heard a whisper
everthing is going to be alright
a shadow of what might have been
another perfect mistake
finally being able to resist
just another test
no longer weak

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  • StabbyJack
    August 26, 2008

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    I've been feeling exactly like this for a while now it was nice to read it in someone elses work a great poem and thank you for posting it


  • stavykm gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    This Is Beautiful

    This is such a powerful poem of emotions and the truths that come with true beauty,...

    I stood still and heard a whisper
    everything is going to be alright
    a shadow of what might have been
    another perfect mistake
    finally being able to resist
    just another test
    no longer weak

    Fantastic just shows even your own inner strength in this beautiful piece of what happens when original feelings of love were truly skin deep, and later after much dreaming you are able resist. Some never learn this lesson.
    What do you mean you don't know how to write poetry like this. This is deep and very meaningful. Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry with me.
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie