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Michaela Janae

My friend through the years,
Into my heart she came,
Can't ever be the same,
Having her wipe away my tears,
Always there in my life,
Ever pushing away the strife,
Living for God everyday,
Always knowing the way.

Just existing was not possible,
Always trying to find ways to live
Never trying to hurt
And attempting move on
Ever she will be my friend.

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DOLPHIN (Silverstar1993)

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  • new born
    September 16, 2008
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    Aww! This is so sweet! I can see why it won gold.


  • Slick99
    August 28, 2008

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    this is pretty good!! good luck in the contest!!! -slick99


  • No longer in use
    August 26, 2008

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    Wonderfully done. You've done both my favorites. Acrostic And Rhyme. Beautiful. Very nice thought for a lovely friend.
    good job.
    Wonderful.
    Exquisite and all the rest.


  • Yorkshire Rose
    August 26, 2008
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    i really like this poem very nicely done, kep writing


  • kishi-tenshi
    August 25, 2008

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    such a good piece...
    i am so sure that this one is written from the heart and you portray this ever so good...
    keep writing...


  • Redeemed15
    August 25, 2008
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    Wow. Thank you Julia. I think that I'm tearing up. Thank You for entering my contest and good luck.

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