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ghosts


The pit of me
lurches, sucking and
straining against the fall.

and I am seeing your face
on repeat,
in shop windows
and in the grit under my fingernails.

I write poetry
on the back of till receipts,
and collect pieces of you
like shards;
each one of them an ache.

so I cling to your embrace
and count the beats of your heart;
in the hope I keep time
and don't get lost.

there is a pressing silence,
A blanket of words we refuse to say.

and I have begun to gather
my ghosts around me like petals.


I carry their graves
in my pocket;

and reach out for you
in the dark.




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thomas newman

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  • Junebug-
    April 9

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    GREAT!

    This is amazing! You should be proud of yourself for this one. I love the playing with words that happen troughout this poem. Great work!


  • annas-obsession
    August 26, 2008
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    AWSOME! i'm so up for some of your language right now!
    love you cheese!
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