humidity forms on
your subtle eyebrows, which are
then wrung with kisses
pastel colors swish
in between you and I to
then become climaxed
legs and lace suffer
through that slow process called
anticipation
Author notes
Who knew Bach could be so sexy? 
A contest entry
- Sensual Haiku by Dalaney.
1050 points, ended August 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Are you kidding? Have you ever heard his prelude to the suite for unaccompanied cello? Wow!
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I have heard that one, it's insane! thanks for reading everyone!
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Nicely penned and Bach could set the tone...
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I can't speak for Bach but your writting is definitely sexy
Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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nice
These are nice, little 17 syllable poems. Are they haiku, or perhaps they are influenced by the haiku form? They are lovely and sensual and beautifully romantic.
Good luck in the cointest,
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lovely words, nice going
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Thanks!
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