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Time Is Precious


"I know! They did look funny!
That silly hat...
I'm glad they helped us make these boats -

oh, and there one goes..."

As Sandy looked over to Bri,
they couldn't help but burst out laughing;

"Let's go play in the park..."







Author notes

Well i did the prompt little justice... none... lol
great contest sorry bout the dud entries lol
best of luck with it!!

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  • Patpowers silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    Sure... I would like to play in the park! Fine job on this!!


  • Riamh
    August 26, 2008
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    Thank you for entering. Be well,
    Slayer