Lush and delicious
Hopefully you are for me
For I have hunger
It is more than touch
We are colliding softly
We are slow motion
These moments are short
Let us taste every second
Our tongues will thank us
Author notes
It's been a long time since I've written a haiku. I hope I went about it right.
A contest entry
- Sensual Haiku by Dalaney.
1050 points, ended August 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Whoa...That's weird. I didn't even comprehend Sensual Haiku for the title of the contest...but when I finished reading yours I though "Sensual, sexual" this is ...to me...is the most sensual, or sexual (I don't know which right now) piece you've written.
I say sexual in the most subtle of ways. Not blunt, but classily done. Haha..classily. Love it!
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Not bad for a long time since....luck to you.
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You did it right
Very nice and tasty 
Best of luck...
Ken
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Very luverly. I wonder if you didn't mean the title to be "Dessert." Good luck in the contest and happy trails
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*slaps self* I sure did, thanks for the heads up
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