I feel So lost and confused.
Feels like i just want to end it all
for good.
running away from nothing
being all empty inside
just wanting you with me now
to hold me close
to cuddle me
wanting to feel your touch
all this loneliness is killing me
eating me deep down inside.
urging me to cut deep down
showing me what real happiness is all about
is that what you want!
because i know its what i want..
Ending it all for now and ever
no worry in the world about me..
please tell me what you think thanks =]
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I know how this feels. I hope you feeel better soon Naomi. I liked it. Good write.
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nice write
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very god but sdining
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awww love it naomi!!! nice write !!!!
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wow, this poem reminds me of mine.
your an amazing write.
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Yea I know pain kills a person slowly but you gotta let it go you gotta laugh and smile
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close your eyes
close your eyes
and make love to the laughter
realise, that this pain
is forever after
and i know, i must go
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Rhis showed alot of your pain, very good but sad...Thanks for adding me to your fav
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why so..
why so sad little one. Why so melancholy
and blue. Why so sad little one.
Don't you know how much I love you.
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This poem, touches me, well cause this is pretty much how i feel, except your second stanza, not so much. Its beautiful, and the pain is emphasized with how you write it, and how i feel that pain too. Great Job!
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wow im so speechless about the poem you wrote.
very cool
~Moonchild~ -
wow... this was very good... very deep. You did a good job writing this. I know the feeling. Keep up your great work.
CrismoNViper (Midoriko) -
wow it almost hurts to read it. powerful write.
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