Neon pink lashes fall to a heavy close,
Unable to watch the yellow nets that engulf her lover's arms
Flail within the electronic thump of melodic euphoria.
Crystaline orbs watch the petite vixen's body sway drunkenly,
Each hand grasping the electronic faeries that comand him
During this absinthe induced dance of carnal hunger.
Author notes
Mm'kay, this is the first... uhm'... PIF/Quickie thing I've entered. I don't know if I followed all the rules as exactly ad you'd like, but I don't know. I didn't go massively over the word limit or anything.
And, if you guys are... uhm'... slow? The promptish was about glow sticks and all it encompasses. ^ ^; These are actually one of the "funner" memories I have from my rave days, heh'.
Anyway, enjoy, loves. ♥
A contest entry
- 10/40/30 quickie/pif! ***POINTS TO BE RAISED*** by Rizzie.
420 points, ended August 30, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is cute. ^_^ I haven't seen you write anything like this in....I don't even remember.
But, like, I loves it! ♥ I'm so glad your mus is back....and I may not understand this poem horribly well (partly because the tv is on and distracting me), but I do love youuuu, so I must love everything you write as well. 
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