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Tornadoe

So I was looking for you,
That's no excuse
Because in a second I saw you
And my brain went loose
The rain is beating agianst the window.
Your image is beating agianst my head.
I pray that you're okay;
I wouldn't mind being dead.
I almost started crying,
Me!? Shed a tear?!
While I was praying
I wanted you near.
I want to protect you,
I gave you my word.
I won't let it hurt you
I leave my words unheard.

Author notes

I wrote this while we were in the hallways of the school because a place 2 million miles away went under a warning! My principals an idiot. But i was happy

"Tornadoe" can either be the real thing, or my 'trnadoe' of emotions.

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  • sora.
    August 26, 2008

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    "The rain is beating agianst the window.
    Your image is beating agianst my head."
    brillianttt!
    =D