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Stop Yelling

I hide In Fear
So I do not have to listen to you're screams
My ears are young
Don't break me
I'll never do it again, I swear
Just Don't Yell
I Always looked up to you
And now All I want to do is look down
So I don't have to look at your face
It breaks me to see you angry
Because I know you can control it all
Just Don't Scream At Me.

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  • Desire gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Stop Yelling
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: My ears are young- I am reminded of how delicate a child is- like petals of a flower- how easily the petals can wilt from lack of nutrients- when the child is exposed to harsh elements- the child will not thrive as well as he or she could Yelling does not help but hurt and a message can be expressed without having to raise voice- Sad to inhale images of verbal abuse- really hard to see a child's head hung low with feelings of worthlessness
    Hopefully the above comment makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Voice and Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~