I think I lost you last year
to the sparkle of falling stars -
Out of reach, I look up
and wonder which one you are.
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prompt is a picture or title prompt.
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A contest entry
- quickie. by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended August 30, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive Criticism Welcome - Be Honest - Thanks :)
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aaww
There is such sadness in this poem and the lovely way of describing it was very touching.
I like how you look up to the sky in the end. Stars really do have a magical feel to them.
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like they say, when you think you have found love, let it. If it is real, it will return. Happy to see yours returned
Joe
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very well put as we search heaven and earth for true love, good luck in this contest
Linda -
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Thankfully I found him just in time
Getting married to him next September 
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Don't be sorry... this was a beautiful take on the prompt... creative and a wonderful image that captures the essence of the fellings... Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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i like this. good luck. i think you did a really good job with the prompt.
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