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To Far

I'm not sure if you see me
But I sure do see you
Do you hear me catch my breath
From across the room

I try to hate you
But it doesn't work
I try to deny you
But you make it hard

I hate to say it
But I love you
With all of my heart
You know I do

I've told you countless times
So why won't you be with me
This has gone to far
But still you get to me

I hate to say it
But I love you
With all of my heart
You know I do

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  • BeautifullyBroken42
    August 25, 2008

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    Wonderful poem you have here. Thanks for following and not totally ignoring the rules. I like the ending:

    I hate to say it
    But I love you
    With all of my heart
    You know I do

    Excelent job! Good luck!


  • Baisi
    August 25, 2008
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    Ooh... This is about Whore-See isn't it? We are in the same predicament... What to do...?


    • Sweet-Pea7
      August 26, 2008
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      i have no idea what we should do. it's horribe, isn't it?