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Refreshed

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Drips of cerulean serenity

poured from sprout of loving lips,

flows as tranquility's tears,

seeping into the mind's well,

cleansing, purifying,

slowly transforming the churning cesspool

of stress's sewage,

into a baptismal.

 

It gushes from the mouth,

a river of sapphire soothing sayings,

immersing other soul's in the peace.

 

Tidal wave of refreshing

spreads across the scenery of life,

drowned in the flood of joy,

reservoirs of lament become pools,

for water that gives eyes

sight to see beauty

in the wasteland of storms.

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Credit picture to google images.

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  • faithwhisperer silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    How lovely! You did a great job putting this together, and using words that are so soothing, and peaceful is wonderful! Congrats on silver!


  • Nicada silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    This is a great take on the picture prompt and your imagery used here is amazing and strong. Great job and thanks so much for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty


  • StarEyes
    August 25, 2008

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    My dear brother,

    What a wonderful job you did on this one! I love it!! This is amazing!

    "Tidal wave of refreshing
    spreads across the scenery of life,"

    Beautiful!

    Best of luck in this conetst!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    Stunning imagery and marvelous word usage!