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I Hate [[Love]] You

Congratulations
Once again!
You hate my guts
Ha! I cannot win!

My lovely friend
My precious band daughter
Is now the victim
Her mind's up for slaughter

I know that you know
I love you greatly
So why make me suffer?
Why want me dead?

Querido J----
Don't let this be
Please understand
You+Love is missing me

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  • hose30
    August 29, 2008

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    This is a very good piece sis. I thought that you put your heart into this one.I am sorry for anything that happen to you. I hope you are better now and take care . Continue to write because poetry is therapy for the mind


  • written-in-ink
    August 28, 2008
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    hahahah

    i love
    very good
    hahaha

    and i can say i have felt like this before...