There is a soft hush around the corner,
a colorful pallet will soon appear,
September, about to burst into song,
brilliance on autumn leaves domineer.
Rustle lightly on the sycamore branches,
upon mighty tall oak and maples trees.
Overhead, see geese and gander flying,
riding wind currents on southern breeze.
First killing frost soon begins to gather,
settles on foliage and window panes.
The harvest moon will soon be waning,
farmers gather and reap summer's grains.
September plays a bittersweet love song,
as summertime romance is left behind.
All too soon summer love is forgotten,
as homework and grades fill the mind.
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I have been away a little while but you still go on doing your lovely writes Sandy. I have much catching up to do.
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Bittersweet, poetic memories...
Thank you for sharing your beautiful, thought-provoking poem of change. Wishing you all the best!!! Peace, Cyn 
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Thanks for a 'cold' share.
Can't spring and summer last forever?
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Initially i thought of this a beautiful tribute to nature, which it is. After a few times of reading my mind kinda latched on to the feeling of how are lives are constantly changing along with the seasons. Not always colourful, sometimes we have to experience the cold barren hands of winter but always safe in the knowledge that summer will soon come round again
Lovely write my friend , gently thought provoking
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Great Comment!!
Good Morning my friend. It is nice to read this lovely coment this morning. Always a pleasure and brings a smile when you stop by. You hsve a wonderful day.
Hugs and Smiles.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Hi Sandy
I somehow missed this poem. It's suppose to be spring in SA, but in one part of the country we are getting snow and the other side it has been so hot that the fields are burning and causing deaths. I enjoyed your poem's flow, its reminders of what has been. I enjoyed reading it. Frans
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Lovely Poem
Hello Frans,
Thank you for the nice comment. I hope the sun warms it up there. You have a wonderful blessed day dear friend. Take care. Hugs and Smiles.
Sandy
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Yes Sandy, autumn days are just around the corner and we brits have to say goodbye to another summer that we have never had!! This piece has a beautiful nostalgic feel to it and flows softly through the mind. Well done my friend. Val
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Lovely Comment!!
Good Morning Val, Nice to have you stop by and read. Thank you for this very nice comment. You take care.
Sandy
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Wow, this is gareat, I really enjoyed this read, Blessings John
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Hi John, Thank you for stopping and commenting. It is appreciated. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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wow, what a perfect discription of the changing times. And it can apply to any age. The picture suiets well tooo. It sets the mood, i feel a beat to the words you have penned. Thanks for sharing the season's. UNT
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate the comment. You take care. Sandy
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That's absolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully penned poem. Well done!
Slayer
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Wonderful Comment
Hello Slayer. Thank you for reading and commenting. Always nice to hear from you. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Fall So Brillant
Colors of September..so beautiful..causes one to look forward to this wonderful nature of autumn..Very Creative!
Conni'
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Lovely Comment!! Thank you for stopping and reading. I apprexciate the comment. Take care. Sandy
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beautiful, you are wise the rhymes are flawless as always sandy and this put lovely pictures in my head, a great write thanks for posting it take care
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Hello, Thank you for this very nice comment. You take care. Sandy
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well done . . liked "Rustle lightly on the sycamore branches" and "September plays a bittersweet love song" . .
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Thank you for stopping and reading. I appreciate this nice comment. Take care. Sandy
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Ahh you have brought us all a bit of September from it's beauty it brings. to the back to school.
some great work here.
Warm thoughts.
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Thank You Tearz, A very nice comment. Thank you. Take care. Sandy
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What a vivid work penned for September. The reader is taken into leaves change, birds flying south, the first frost that will come. Farmer's reap the crops as summer love is forgotten to see children return to school. The rhyme is nice and tie the stanza together moving time forward.
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Dan, Your comment is so nice. This was a fun write for me. Fall is my very favorite seasons. I guess because of all the family holidays ahead and beautiful scenery in the hills of Pennsylvania.
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Always nice when my friend stops by. Hugs and Smiles.
Blessings and Peace,
Sandy
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A good take
Days to remember of time past in ones life...mac
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Good Morning Mac
Always a pleasure to read your coment. Hope all is well with you. Sending some BIG BRIGHT YELLOW SUN your way to Ohio!! Enjoy as I tip my glass of milk to my dear friend. You take care.
Bless You Always,
Sandy
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