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I love how you made me laugh
made me smile
kept me happy
through the while
missing you
more each day
i guess is my price to pay
I'm sorry for what i did
You're doing the same in return
I guess you got ur wish
Of making me break
Returning the heartache
And watch me burn
I'm out of your life for good
I promise not to say a word
I'll only be alright
If you do the same in return
You say You love her
I dont believe thats true
All I know is it hurts
To hear it all from you

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  • just mercedes gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    Oh, this is so sad. You've expressed well some very difficult emotions; you leave me with the feeling of a narrator who is used to distancing themself from hurt, in order to deal with it.

    Poetically, I'd like to see less capitalizing, no chatspeak (ur). Well written.