Suicide baby,She is caught
Intertwined in her mind
of what to be,and what not
She cannot see
What beauty others do
Suicide baby
She'll be the death of you
Love matters not
when the angels lose
Rows of prose
Can sometimes prevent the scars
She cuts and stabs
and tears out hearts
Suicide baby
has not learned to care
Yearning for the death
of anyone who dares
A contest entry
- Picture prompt by Lexie -.
450 points, ended September 2, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I want to know what you think!
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Welcome to Allpoetry! I am SilverWolf. Pleased to read your poem!
A wonderful peice of art you have here. 19 lines, quite short for a poem. For being that short, it sure is great! It goes very deep and you can tell that it was written from your heart. You put your all in the poem. Something I greatly admire. It is "Dark", and it is somewhat romantic. In your title you should capitilize both words so its "Suicide Baby" and not "suicide baby". Best of luck in the contest and I hope you enjoy Allpoetry as I have!
Sincerely,
Silverwolf
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a very good write!! hoe you did well in the contest!!
have a great day!!
Emma
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thanks
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I really like these lines:
"Love matters not
when the angels lose
Rows of prose"
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thank you for the nice comment
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