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Erected Growth

Erected Growth

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

The newborn roots of your passion ,

to the springtime of your smile .

The first petal’s of baby teeth buds ,

to the erotic silk of your skin robbing the doves.

The colors of your tranquility,

are too beautiful for vision,

and as I saw you grow before me,

like new era upgrading television.

Your naked beauty reminds me,

of the blooming flower, unknown.

And as I was shown your soul

I cried in fall November .

Remembering the tender loving care

of when I first gave, birth to you in joy ,

My love once again witness, that I

have found truth again.

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 31, 2008

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    Ah...The beauty is reaveled with beautiful words....I love it..well doneIndeed ..and my thanks for sharing it...


  • darell
    August 26, 2008

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    Awesome!

    Julia this poem flows out of the
    issues of your heart. A songs melody
    of incredible love. So tender and affectionate.
    Each word embraces the gentle parts of the
    soul and reels in joyous applause.
    A very soft and beautiful piece


  • rose petal desires
    August 26, 2008

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    auntie i like literally adore this its very much so a very different side of you its talented ts creative its soft its up beat i been gonee and you ahve new shoe laces nice job


  • onesugar gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    A beautiful tender write that was a pleasure to read.

    All the best hon
    ~sugar~


  • kennethlaney
    August 26, 2008
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    Very Nice

    Every now and then you calm yourself down. Very nice Julia.


  • D Saul So Sexy
    August 26, 2008

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    i honestly just simply loved the way you worked the quote ma you just simply amaze me darlin with the deepness up under your young soul you are quite a lady writer sexy

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