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Days Past.

I miss the days of years ago.
When we were all the same.
But it seems, as time has gone,
These things have seemed to change.

Stories shared and lessons learned.
We all shared this fate.
So many hours spent outside.
I didn't matter how late.

We shared our lives, hopes, and dreams.
And knew this was our time.
We had so many things alike,
That our lives where like a rhyme.

But those days have come and gone.
Just like the seasons of the year.
And now we all have moved apart.
In a world that spreads it's fear.

Author notes

Monday's entry. I have been thinking a lot about how on somebody's birthday party, all of us friends would just go outside and talk for hours on end. I think we actually stayed outside all night a few nights. Well, now all of us have kind of split up, we don't hang out nearly as much as we used to. I'm hoping this year we can do that again...

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  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 2, 2008

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    I liked this. It sucks when things change, but it's just a part of life. And if you can change it back there's always going to be a part that's different.

    You did a good job with this, I've missed reading your poetry.

    Take care


    • Eternally Fallen
      October 2, 2008
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      Awe...

      Thank you very much for this wonderful comment. I agree with what you said, but I still miss "the old days" lol.

      Also, you need to start writing more so I can comment on them!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 27, 2008

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    Sometimes it's really hard to see how people can slowly grow apart, grow up and have a different cycle of life. I know I miss those times in class when a few mates and I would muck about, but now I rarely ever see them. Or those times I would go trick or treating with an old friend and her little sister, it was so fun. But nothing seems to last.