Eyes locked in radar vision.
Thoughts echoing into our space.
You seem altered somewhat
or is it by design?
Wrapped in cushions labeled for extinction.
Hardly worth a double mention.
All that matters is about to end,
if I should lose you as a friend.
Far more than friendship my heart craved.
So this news now, puts me in delay.
My message can't get to you now.
Unless you figure it out, somehow.
Author notes
I picked "Lost In Translation" and, no I will not say its better than yours hahahaha
A contest entry
- How About You Do Better .... (maybe not such a quickie...) by righteousme.
1050 points, ended September 8, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i enjoyed the message with this piece here... though rhyme is not my friend usually ... thank you for your time and your talent ...
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