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Sunday; My secret dream

His hands on my skin,
So warm and sweet,
Bending me over to his will.
 
Ropes tied tight around,
My wrists and feets,
No where to run to.
 
Tied to a steal framed bed,
Shooting my back by the touch,
A whip he holds, wittingly.
 
All I can hear is its roar,
As it hits my warm skin,
Pain, oh how it turns me on.
 
Seeing his manly pride stand tall,
Feeling the wetness deep inside,
'Oh take me now' I scream to you.

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Erotic is something I never do. This is my second try at it. So yeah, please be honest if you think this sucks.

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    June 5

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    Lovely poem awesome background. I cant really tell you which I like best because they both are so good.
    ~~Iridessa~~


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    Fantastic

    ssssssss to you my dear sweet niece,Well Honey, you have blown me away with your write, and CONGRATS on the gold, a well deserved trophy for a wonderful write, you are a naughty girl for writing such an awesome erotic poem, but hey..... I loved it, every word penned.I would like to see you write more like this poem, you have much talent, now where's that whip??on your knees girl..
    lol lol.
    Much love to you my sweet Meroza.
    Aunty Anne.


    • Meroza
      December 21, 2008
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      Haha!
      I'll try and write some more erotic for you auntie but it all depends on my mood, and I don't think I know enough about bed playing to write a lot of poems about it. All I've written so far is stuff I've learned from other poems. But I will try my best ^_^

  • Zenda-Lokki silver member
    December 3, 2008
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    Maybe its something you should do more often then hun x Is very sexy x Am nursing a semi hehe x thanks so much hun xx


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 27, 2008

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    Hmmm, I don't write erotic a lot either. Sensual, I will cover but not erotic. I like this, it sounds similar to a kind of dream I had about someone pretty sexy that I know!

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