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Brief Concordance

On the tip of a whispers song
dusting breaths from gossamer wings
I am bound in conservatory’s peace

Wrapped in a timeless Brumaire
lyric’s leisurely drape my exposed soul
nourishing notes from this grand feast

As I allow my lashes to lightly rest
on a bridge denying loneliness
beside me brittle branches reach
gently rustling in their speech

Forward beckons
the butterfly orchestra fades….

Author notes

Visual Stimulation: Hand_of_Sorrow_by_Iardacil

Brumaire - the month of mist

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  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

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    This is really beautiful and enchanting.. I really love the flow of this as well.. You did such a wonderful job with this piece.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • Confusedboy
    August 26, 2008
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    A Lovely place to spend the evening, enjoying the solitude. very nice.