Dance about my spirit
as you ease my mind.
Fortified with grace
such nurturing rhyme.
Relinquished are my fears
as I entertain your stay.
For the battle that's uphill
your awesomeness assuages.
Little melodic designs
ply for my attention.
I just loosely incline
into the moment's tension.
As you sweep my soul
dis-solutions cannot stay.
I grasp on for more
of the melodic interchange.
Full-tilt you linger
never sensing a release
I stagger for your bounty
I'm engaged and now at peace.
A contest entry
- music: poetry of the air by Nicolette.
1500 points, ended September 7, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I forgot how much I bathe in your poetry!
I Must add you to my favorites, you use your pen and
voice so smartly and your flow was to die for!
I loved that..
I grasp on for more
of the melodic interchange.
Full-tilt you linger
never sensing a release
I stagger for your bounty
I'm engaged and now at peace.
BRAVO! BRAVO!
way to write!
ears/Seattle
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Beautiful rhyming. It felt very natural
Wonderful feel; very tranquil and soothing. Thanks so much for entering your little musical sonata here. 
- Namita
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Thank you for your lovely comments lol
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Very nice lyrical quality about this poem and the mood here is peaceful and comforting. I liked "full-tilt your finger"...lovely. I also got a sense of release from your words - and that is exactly how music should be (well, at times). Thank you for a very nice melodic piece.
~ Nicolette
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