Distant notes from afar,
delicate
and pleading,
resonate to form
tiny bubbles
that release
intonations from
the all embracing soul
of the universe
As I, the quiet listener,
sit mesmerized,
longing to become
a miniature opus
in the symphony
of life.
A contest entry
- music: poetry of the air by Nicolette.
1500 points, ended September 7, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh ...man....i really adored this poem!
we could feel the imagery and each word un-ravelled
tenderly the beauty and blessings that is indeed
poetry...and this poem is wonderful to enjoy!
As I, the quiet listener,
sit mesmerized...
lovely!
ears/Seattle
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This is wonderful! "miniature opus" in the symphony of life, eh? Lovely line, that one! I quite enjoyed reading this one - thanks for entering, good luck.
~ Namita
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And am I happy to see you in one of my contests, Marc - this is a first, isn't it?
. And with such a lovely miniature opus - what a joy to read this... almost like a deep sigh, a wish for oneness, wholeness... simply beautiful... i'm the quiet listener here too and the music is so very soothing. Thank you!
~ Nicolette
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I loved this!!! The whole poem sings of notes floating around in the air
I cannot judge on the free verse but I surely enjoyed reading it! LOVELY!!
All the best in the conetst! I am cheering for you!
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Becks
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Hello.
I see you have a nice musical themed write yourself, hahah. This has a very spiritual theme as well, with shades of interconnectivity, oneness, silence of the mind or at least attempt to, so you can become an instrument of the divine and join in complete abandonment in the symphony from within; well at least that is how I interpreted it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
My regards.
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