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Paper birds

Missing image

The words came like poison raindrops

Beckoning questions she dare not ask

 

For the answers had already broken the surface

Creating ripples upon the quiet waters of hope

 

They came like folded paper birds

Delicately landing upon the surface

 

Their paper cuts decorating an aching heart.....

                               Already lost in the rain

   

 

Author notes

pic by: Hand_of_Sorrow_by_Iardacil

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  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

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    This was really heartfelt and sorrowful at the same time.. The imagery was really vivid and detailed as well.. You did such a wonderful job, very emotional thank you very much for sharing.. Best of luck in the contest!


    Angel


  • hotchocolate gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    heres some clappys

  • hotchocolate gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    I love this!!! Good Job!!!!!!!