Words come so easily to you...
Trying to tangle me
Suffocating me,
Whispering in my ear
"just say yes"
My mind isn't working
You slide on top of me
Now I'm passing out
When I wake,
I see the slither marks on the floor.
It leads away from me and right to your door.
Author notes
My word prompt of choice was snake... it was kind of interesting to write the poem without being able to use the word snake...
A contest entry
- Word Prompt Contest by Kari.
600 points, ended August 26, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The World Is Not So Beautiful From The Outside... by Emmabug.
550 points, ended June 16, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
whatever...
Comments
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Wow I don't even know what to think here! It was for some other contest, that must be why, I will have to research...
Keep it up, and thanks for entering! -
eeeeeeeeee creepy....I believe that I can almost see the snake in my mind at the very end of the poem...but wait is it...
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that is really good
i like how you keep a good variety of topics in your poems and they are all original
the opening line is really good also
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