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Beast Within

How can I describe you?

Beast that lives within me

Casting a dismal shadow

Over my life

But light creeps in

In the little spaces

I bask in its glory

As brief and fleeting

As these moments are

 

You try and fill my life with lies

Speaking of my ugliness

Of the absence of my worth

You say I am nothing

To no one on the earth

If all this is true

Then why do you struggle so much

To keep me down

Engulfed in your wicked shadow

 

Perhaps you know in the light

I could see the truth

That the beast within me

Is an empty horror

A substance less shadow

Cursing the light

Afraid of the truth

I must find the courage

To see beyond the darkness

 

To battle the fear

That you have fostered in me

But for now I must cling

To the patches of light

Hang on and continue

To fight my way out

From under your vile darkness

So I can live free in the light

A contest entry

Can you feel what I am feeling?

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    November 8, 2008
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    I remeber reading something in a book about someone characterizing their pain as the beast, this reminds me of that. The part about if you are so worthless, why does that person try to keep you down really touched me, and spoke to me. Since I was told constantly that I was worthless when younger. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. \♥/


  • innocence jaded.xx
    September 7, 2008

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    Wow. This was incredible. I love you use of words & imagery. Very well written =) Everything about this piece was just captivating & brilliant. Thank you so much for entering & best of luck to you ! ♥