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Tattered Reflection

The consuming mist of the overcast sky
looks upon me as I walk along
the bridge is creaking beneath my feet,
the cool breeze of autumn creeps in.

As I walk across this tattered bridge,
I allow all thoughts to swirl in through my mind
even the ones that make me shiver,
today's a day for reflection.

I look at the water running below me,
at the moving reflection of my being
and I let all thoughts swirl,
on my journey across the tattered bridge

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  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

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    This was really interesting.. A poem of relfection.. I like that.. it's unique and beautifully written.. Thank you very much for sharing I greatly enjoyed it.. Best of luck in the contest..

    Angel