They called him Tiny Tim
for he is extremely thin.
He often steals the show.
Girls jump into his flow.
Once he fell through a big crack.
The guys give him little slack.
For though he has a pencil brain,
his charm with girls gives them a pain.
His mom with dreams for him galore,
keeps him shopping the best stores.
His height began to outgrow his rim,
so then they dubbed him Tall Tiny Tim.
If ever you cross his path, don't smirk.
Don't laugh, and please don't jerk.
He's as strong as he is tall and tiny,
and he's apt to give you one big shiny.
Author notes
'funny' poetic poetry
A contest entry
- Laugh out Loud by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended September 12, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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HA ` pretty funny -- Tiny Tim -- who was tall and thin~ This almost borders on the rhyme Peter Piper ~ I think written with the same type of flair.
Nice job ~ thanks for entering it in the contest ~
Best of luck to you
Florida Sunshine
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haha glad you liked...thanks so much for the award and for the points, I was happily shocked thanks again lol
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