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Bridge of Karma

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Dedicated to an 'Angel' on the bridge!

Oh No!
Bang...
Where did he go...
I hang..
In suspense,
No recompense..
He went on ahead,
Now he's dead,
Told me to wait,
Like I was at heaven's gate,
Was it fate,
Karma..
What a drama,
I want to be with him,
This is grim.

 

 

Copyright:Kazytc
August 2008

Author notes

Wrote two versions, the above is the 10-15 line one for this wonderful contest, (thanks to Angelfower.. Sis for this contest), the longer version is below.

Bridge of Karma (Longer version)

Dedicated to an 'Angel' on the bridge!

Oh No!
Bang...
Where did he go...
I hang..
In suspense,
No recompense..
He went on ahead,
Now he's dead,
Told me to wait,
Like I was at heaven's gate,
Was it fate,
Karma..
What a drama,
I want to be with him,
This is grim.
But he can swim,
Did he drop,
Into the ravene,
Let me swap..
This devastating scene,
For something nice,
Put fatality on ice,
He made it across,
But he got cross,
Cos I was scared,
To venture on,
Anon,
Bridge too far feared,
Nervous me,
Angry he,
Smoke from his ire,
Like a pyre,
Bridge over troubled water,
To much for his daughter,
Scaredy cat,
How about that!
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Allpoetry.com Contest
August 2008
Picture Prompt
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2418931
Write something beautiful and...moving..
10 poets
10-15 lines( No more then 15)
Picture prompt.. Please Credit: Hand_of_Sorrow_by_Iardacil
Be creative!!
Angel
Enter this contest
* This is not an anonymous contest - the editors will be able to see your name.
* Closes in 13 days, or after 8 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 300
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem


Picture Credit: Credit: Hand_of_Sorrow_by_Iardacil

Picture depicts:
Female in long cream floaty dress with long dark hair stood at the start of a wooden suspension bridge with her hands clasping her head, smoke ahead of her making what lies there invisible.

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  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

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    Oh! lol. I love it!! it made me stratch my head and laugh! lol. you did such a wonderful job Sis! I really loved it! thank you very much for sharing!! best of luck!


    Angel

  • celadia
    August 26, 2008

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    This almost reminds me of a hanging and the condemned man having his last thoughts. Love the karma in this.


    • Kazytc silver member
      August 26, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very
      inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX