The silver moon shone shyly on two strangers on the sand
Whose lives were lost in love and lips and lust
We played the long lost melodies that moonbeams understand
And learned that we were lovers each could trust
The breath of love blew softly from the moon who hung above
Where you and I were learning all our ways
She smiled at us so sweetly as we swam straight into love
While perfecting all loves pleasant little plays
The act of love completed with contentment in your eye
I heard the softest moon breath slowly slip into a sigh
Author notes
Prompt 5: ~moon's breath slips into a *sigh* by perfectsunset
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie- Prompts; 15 entries by perfectsunset.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sweet and lovelyt indeed
but we know about moonlight dont we all.
This as usual is grade A material
Love ya
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Oh this was such a sweet & tender write.
Beautiful descriptions & soft flow.
Wonderful elaborations & thoughts!
Thanks for sharing & best of luck -
Boffo!
This is very smooth, precise use of language.
Luvit!
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Thank-you
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Just lovely, Jeff. And flows as perfectly as a poem of this topic should. The moon is a powerful audience. You did wonderful things with her.
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Ooh ooh ooh what a little moonlight can do to you....
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(I'll bet ye cannae recite this when ye're blootered, big man!)
Sometimes you are too clever for your own good, Jeff. This is fun, and romantic, and totally Greenian.
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