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Beauty Lies...

Missing image
Beauty lies
Through tender ruby lips
Slipping shimmering words
Carefully crafted love song’s created
Through the pearly teeth
Skillful poetry exhales
Beading scenes together
…well directed Oscar movie is played

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 29, 2008

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    skillful is your pen my friend, that is what i think, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, my friend.

  • takemypainaway
    August 25, 2008
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    very nice catch at the end
    best of luck
    --kat
  • carole21
    August 25, 2008
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    nice write for the prompt . . thanks for the contest entry