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Strength of One

Strength of One

For all that's happened
And all that's to come
I pray for you
And your strength of one

The gifts I offer
And wish to give
Cannot bestow moments
You wish to relive

They live in your heart
Strong as a rock
Not dictated by time
Or the ticking clock

Fair maiden Knight
You are strong of will
An essence of you
I cannot fulfill

For there are things of women
Men shall not see
An inner fortitude
Far beyond me

So understand this
When I say that I'm there
To support your strength
And to show that I care

For I cannot undo
What is already done
So I grant you the wish
Of your strength of one

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Poem #8 of 50. Poems of all types dedicated to my love ... the maiden Knight.

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  • Victoria of Aragon
    August 25, 2008

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    Rhyyyyming. ♥ As I'm sure I've said countless times in the past, I envy your ability to rhyme. LIKE, I suck at it. It's true. =(

    Uhm, yeah. The theme in all of these are very clear, and very... I don't know... repeatitive? Not in a bad way or anything, but each poem seems to say that you will always love this girl no matter what, and want to help her with all of her troubles. //Head nod action.//

    Very well done. Again. I think by the time I read all of these, I wiiiiillll... run out of things to say, heh'. x3