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Essence



You are
Warm air and sunshine
Healing for my soul
Natural
Unique
Ancient
Free
Beloved.


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May be the shortest piece I've ever composed, but for me, it is among the most true...

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  • Ahkam silver member
    August 26, 2008
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    ya

    its realy wonderful Natural, Unique, Ancient but rit from your heat...Peace


    • rhondasail
      August 26, 2008
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      Hello Ahkam, thanks for reading and commenting, though I am wondering ...what heat you refer to here...??...Peace, Rhonda


  • Freelance writer
    August 26, 2008

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    The unique features you have portrayed about your beloved are enviable. Of course if the beloved is Almighty who can come near to Him! A lovely piece.

    • rhondasail
      August 26, 2008
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      Who indeed...thank you for the lovely comment, Sandip. Peace to you, Rhonda


  • hamid
    August 26, 2008

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    Wooow

    Wooow really hearth touching although simple words and a very short poem but its lovely. Good Work
    Have A nice Day!


  • Lucy.
    August 25, 2008

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    I love this!! Warm air and sunshine....a deliciously beautiful way to begin it. And ancient, I love how you've included that.

    This is gorgeous.


    • rhondasail
      August 25, 2008
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      Oh Lucy-Skye, you always make me smile with your enthusiasm...thanks for loving this one...the warm air and sunshine are like the womb...safe and nurturing, warming and enfolding...you do know how to pick the very best parts off the plate! ...I am happy you like..I mean love, this. Peace always, Rhonda


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    August 25, 2008

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    Yes... the greatest good.

    My only comment would be, while this is all beautifully true, that the qualities do have a difference and also perhaps a natural hierarchy due to them, even though all belonging to the One Essence.

    Unique - being the most essential, there being none like it, being beyond comparison and because of this qualification not depending on any other particular, at all.
    Beloved- Depends on 'Lover', the essential being 'Love'.
    Free - Depends on the possibility of 'Fixed' or 'Limit', though you could argue that 'Free' is even free of this dependance but I would call that 'Independence' rather than 'Free'.
    Natural - Of Nature, this to me seems to be only once something can be said about it, in terms of it having already revealed itself to give a context in which to be so.
    Ancient - Depends on Time and so is less essential than the first three. That's unless it points to the 'Eternal' but I think that's still 'understood' relative to Time.

    'Warm air and sunshine
    Healing for my soul'

    These are more particularised and closer to relative subjectivity.

    I love this write from you and this isn't a criticism, only an observation put very clumsily on my part. I do believe there is something important to consider here though, that there is an 'order of degrees' present in relationship, which will be more or less 'perfect', when pointing at a 'taste' of the Essence. AND I'm not saying mine is, this is just for consideration and if of any value.

    Thanks for sharing... and reminding... you angel.

    Sol


    • rhondasail
      August 25, 2008
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      Sol...I love your comments so much...they are worth framing for those days when we think no one notices or isn't listening...and I love those ears of yours! Peace my brother, Rhonda

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