THE GARDEN WELL
In the garden was a wishing well,
I had been feeling rather blue.
Out popped a wee little gnome,
said I'll make you feel brand new.
All you need do is toss a coin,
your three wishes will come true.
No matter how big or how small,
I will grant your wishes for you.
I thought a minute, made a wish,
then waited for it to come true.
Wishing for a love of my own,
my mind had a vision of you.
Thoughts of you running rampant,
I wished for my heart's desire.
Tall, handsome brown eyed man,
someone to set my soul on fire.
Soon I met this wonderful man,
he really got under my skin.
He melted my heart with a smile,
leading me down a path of sin.
Then the wee gnome disappeared,
so I went over to the well.
Out came the long arm of Satan,
pulled me into a fiery hell.
So next time you see a we gnome,
just smile and say no thank you.
Tell him to shove his three wishes,
then gently squish him with your shoe.
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lol...how wonderful! It is whimsical and fun, yets holds a fantastic message. A great little read. Love the graphic as well.
Sam
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Great Comment
Thank you Sam. I appreciate your very nice comment. Glad it brought a smile. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Nicely done, the reader is caught in the wishing, giving, sinning to find Satan's grant to capture a soul. Great ending, lots of humor and smiles here.
Rhyme is done so well to build and smoothly move the quatrain.
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Thank You My Friend
Glad I could give you a smile Dan. This was a fun write to read. Always enjoy reading your comments. Hugs and Smiles,
Bless You,
Sandy 
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lol
Sandy a little gem filled with wit and wonder. But the message is clear to be.. The grass is not always greener. Lol so nicely penned.
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Good Morning Bob
It is always nice when you stop by my friend. Thank you for this very nice coment. You have a great day. You take care, Sandy
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