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This is Me

Here I stand...
Not bold..proud..confident
But this is me..

Living deep within my thoughts
My soul is searching..my body is dead
Tender wind hugging my body

My heart is confused
My voice is silent
My existance is meaningless

This fragile rock is my support
Though beautifully attired
Can never be seen due to my wicked intentions

I can't even cry or show emotion
Even the skies are afraid
The oceans cannot be controlled

My presence causes distruction
So where can I stand?
'Cause this is me...





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  • scarred by the River
    September 23, 2008
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    AWESOME!

    I **LOVE** this poem! It's so true for many people, I can totally relate!


  • Rclane gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    Interesting take on prompt and powerfully penned. Thank you for your entry and best of luck in contest.

  • Marcr
    August 25, 2008
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    WORD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    daz d flick
    sooo kool