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Ruby Kisses

rubies hide the blood
Spilling from those lips
Pain from a broken heart
Trying to escape
Outsiders only see
What ruby kisses appear to be;
Happiness
Mine are throbbing
pain

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Photo prompt: 30 words or less (photobucket)

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  • LadyLuff
    August 25, 2008
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    this is really good and deep Amy!
    Nice write
    keep it up!!
    x O x


  • takemypainaway
    August 25, 2008
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    wow this has a very deeper meaning to it!!!
    best of luck
    --kat


  • whos my humblepie
    August 25, 2008

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    Wow,
    "Outsiders only see
    What ruby kisses appear to be;"

    Those two lines are the best in this write.
    Really, they're lovely.
    ♦ ♦

  • carole21
    August 25, 2008
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    good take on the prompt . . thanks for the contest entry