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Dreaming Oh Please Make It Stop

How much is that hunk on the stage there,
I love his skimpy clothes he does wear.
Should someone please tell me what he is doing, "OH MY"
you cut that out  I think its a crime.

All the women are screaming,
and this excites him so.
Dancing and so openly preaming,
and embarassed down in the chair to hide I go.

Then out of the crowd as I look up,
right before me just wearing a cup.
I faint dead away then the lights go out,
and I awake in my bed yelling "no not now!"

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What a dream

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  • daviscth silver member
    August 25, 2008
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    LOL!!!! I loved the last lines. This is awesome.


  • oneeye
    August 25, 2008
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    Forbidden fruit go back sleep and enjoy its sweetness!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    Lots of lookers I see reading but not yet commenting! Being I know you, I know this would be humorously done..I don't recall having one of these dreams..But you make it so FUNNY! I can almost see you sliding down in that theatre chair while looking! You have so creatively kept us in suspense, and then turned it all around with you wanting for the entertainment to continue! You are hilarious...By the way, I wonder where that dream came from, Patty?! Ha Ha Ha!