Light illuminates the soul,
beacon for external,
creating a path;
from duality to oneness.
Evolving thoughts,
designing harmony;
bringing divinty home.
Enlightening the earth
sparks ignite
the darkness,
as the rainbow returns
to one light.
A contest entry
- From Beginning and , At the End, ll by LadyLavender.
900 points, ended August 25, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Let's Talk About Heaven by Poesing.
600 points, ended September 10, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Don't know how i missed this one.
I esecially enjoyed the imagery you used with the lighthouse.As the light's beam pans out across the vast ocean, a beacon for all lost souls!
Well done my friend.
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Beautiful write here
Yes within the emmbrace of love the light does shine for to know love is to know faith leads -
Me thinks it as simple as that!
Heaven is a rainbow.
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Well, I guess
If you close your eyes really, really tight, you might be able to make a Lighthouse into heaven, especially since Jesus is referred to as the Lighthouse in song.
Jesus illuminates the soul, and we return to the light at the end. Good job. God bless you and good luck in my contest.
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This is a very good write
Yes indeed from beginning to end we shall shine through our soul to bring faith and harmony to life
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The last sentences really ends this poem nicely. There's alot of talent in this...
Good luck and thank you for entering. -
Lovely!
Another bookmark to add! I thought you would have used the lighthouse BG for this, though.
Still, very nice poem.
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Beautiful inspiration, the metephoric look of your words paints a pretty picture of the Lighthouse.
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Hello.
This is a nice little write. And I do agree with a lot of what is said in here, neither here nor there really, ahhaa. Am sure you know my view on soul and light hahaha. Your write speaks to me of being who we are, rather than who we think we are. And your last line, I do like the reverse prism effect. I wish you well in the contest.
My regards.
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this is a lovely inspiration...being a lover of lighthouses...they are a symbol and beacon to recapture lost souls...
and on the sea of life
i will summon
all to my soul
all that are special to me
mankind
and all living creatures...
mal
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