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Where Serenity Begins

Missing image
Blues and greens
for all the eye to see
could it be
that this is just a dream


As I stand upon
damp seas of green
I look out over
a most glorious thing

Deep blue waters
that invite the soul
touch its life
for warmth from the cold

A light breeze
touches your skin
this is where
serenity begins



~Lady Raven~

Author notes

This picture is from a beautiful place in New Zealand

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  • Kalima
    August 26, 2008

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    This was a pretty write...And like always, I love ur backgrounds... luv ya and miss ya,
    ~Stacey~


  • Vampirehelex
    August 25, 2008

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    Wonderful

    As always you your writing is splendid and well thought out. You pace is very mellow but good. The imagery is as always very clear and very beautiful. I dont think that i will ever not enjoy reading your writes. Keep it up and enjoy yourself as always.

    ~Darkness


  • owlishhunter
    August 25, 2008

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    If it be just a dream, may the dreamer remain in sweet slumber! What a wonderful piece you have written, my love!!!!


  • NyteShade
    August 25, 2008
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    This is beautifully written

    It does justice to the picture you used. Nice work


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    this is abs. gorgeous, i love the serenity you captured,and the picture is beautiful
    keep writting and take care
    Stephanie ♥

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